Well done, Iliena, what makes a good chapter even better is when the writer does something a little more original as with a short verse that creates more tension and mystery. Readers do notice this and will remember this chapter for its originality. Great chapter. Loved it.
Click on the link to read Iliena's chapter and the rest of the story.
http://www.thestorymint.com/serials/fayre-fw
http://www.thestorymint.com/serials/fayre-fw
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